Saturday, May 7, 2011

Response to Juli’s “Fair Treatment of Skateboarders”


             I absolutely love this post and agree with the argument.  It immediately caught my attention both in the book and on the blog because I am in a town that has absolutely no desire to promote the safety or fair treatment of cyclists.  The sidewalks are narrow, destroyed, or in most cases, imaginary.  It seems every day in the news a rider or skateboarder is hit by a car or truck and is sent to an area hospital with life-threatening injuries.  I ride in a town that is the same size as Norman but lacks the Oklahoma City metropolitan feel.  I visit Norman and Broken Arrow just outside of Tulsa regularly to cycle.  I do this only to suffer bent wheels, broken pedals, and several scrapes and bruises as I enjoy a ride with my family and friends.  I haven’t been hit by a car yet but I have had some scary moments.
            I support the fair treatment of anyone or any group who, in these economic times, promotes and practices safe fitness and family recreation.  Langley’s argument for fair treatment of skateboarders works here at home, in Broken Arrow, and in Norman the same.  It is a shame that with all the recent focus on obesity, diabetes, and heart disease an argument hasn’t surfaced and gained traction in suburban America to mandate that the infrastructure be changed to support a healthy lifestyle through cycling, skateboarding, or roller-blading.  My hat is tipped to Juli for highlighting of the need for change in her community and associating that need with an argument from the course book (Ramage 141-43).
           


Work Cited

Ramage, John D., John C. Bean and June Johnson. Writing Arguments:  A Rhetoric with Readings.  8th Edition.  New York:  Longman, 2010. Print.

Kairos


             The concept of kairos, or suggestion that arguments should be made at “an opportune time,” is best described in the text of chapter six as “sensing the opportune [argument] time through psychological attentiveness to situation and meaning.” The practice of kairos, as I understand it, is best done through timing and paying particular attention to the news and events surrounding and shaping the details of the argument.  The chapter sets the tone of understanding by noting that “kairos concerns a whole range of questions connected to the timing, fitness, appropriateness and proportions of a message within an evolving rhetorical context (Ramage 116-19).”
            Recently I did some rather rigorous research to find a new laptop.  I concluded this research with a budget in mind, a very specific set of required features listed, and a short list of only two brands targeted.  As I reflect upon the situation that I found while shopping and eventually purchasing the laptop that I am currently using at home, I remember some interesting argument details and moments of kairos and the lack thereof.  The salesperson at the first store keyed in on and found the unit that met or exceeded my required specifications and laid out price point but did this at a very inopportune time.  This poor timing became obvious to him when I laid out the internet prices from the store website for the models that he had discussed and I then highlighted the significant lower prices online.  Upon leaving that store frustrated and empty-handed I visited another store where I found a salesperson I will refer to as Mr. Kairos.  He didn’t push, pull, or drag me anywhere but rather gathered information from me and steered me to a unit that specifically met my needs.  This happened to be the same unit that was targeted at the first store. When asked about price he offered the best that he could do and asked if I had searched online for the same model at the competitor’s sites.  I admitted that I did online shop and found this model elsewhere for the same price that he offered but with a small added bonus.  He, just-in-time, informed me that the company with the same price and small added bonus has decided to quit business due to financial woes but hasn’t yet offered this information to the public.  He then offered a similar added bonus and proof of the competitor’s bad news that I had requested.  He also made it clear that I could probably wait and find the unit cheaper at the competitor’s store but may not have access to support or warranty with it.  The timing of his argument sold me.
            I admit this is a rather clouded representation of kairos in argument mainly because I am a poor story-teller.  In my mind the kairos in arguments is obvious.  With internet, technology, and time-stamping on nearly everything around, timing is available and is critical.  Rebuttal and challenge in argument is definitely driven on kairos because news and timing is so widely accessible around the world today.  Kairos is important and definitely adds the extra dimension in the rhetorical triangle that stresses timing.  Timing in writing brings forward importance to the audience and therefore kairos equals importance.   
           

           
           




Work Cited

Ramage, John D., John C. Bean and June Johnson. Writing Arguments:  A Rhetoric with Readings.  8th Edition.  New York:  Longman, 2010. Print.

Response to the Unit Two Reading Assignment


             In unit two I felt that the reading assignment contained the essential elements that are held within a rhetorical argument.  Throughout the course I have used this reading, specifically chapters four and five, as a guide.  As the course has gone on I have definitely received a greater understanding of rhetoric as a whole.  I do not yet, however, feel satisfied with my ability to analyze visual arguments such as signs, posters, or rhetorical cartoons and come away with an understanding of the writer’s argument.  With this in mind I decided to revisit chapter four’s section on examining visual evidence and framing evidence to get a better understanding and perhaps some clarification on my shortcomings. 
            Visual evidence and visual arguments, as described in chapter four, are subject to the specific “values and beliefs” of the writer and the audience.  These values and beliefs are built from the writer’s and audiences’ life experiences or, by the chapter’s description, the “particulars of our existence.”  The chapter then puts this collected value and belief set to a term; “angle of vision.” This “angle of vision” is then likened to “perspective, bias, a lens, or filter.”  I can relate to the “angle of vision” metaphors of filter and lens because I have a good understanding of photography. I understand that when you point an unfiltered camera lens at the sun the representative image is white, blown out, and distorted.  The same lens with a good light filter will produce a stunning image that portrays the sun as a cool-blue idol-like subject that can do no harm but wields infinite power.  The use of this kind of mindset and the understanding of the chapters’ examples helps me to grasp visual arguments and visual evidence better than ever (Ramage 94-97).  
            Visual evidence framing goes hand-in-hand with interpreting evidence and arguments.  Chapter four describes evidence framing as “selecting evidence from a wide field of data then framing this data through rhetorical strategies that emphasize some data, minimize other data, and guide the reader’s response.”  This description sums up evidence framing very well in my opinion.  I return to the camera lens.  When choosing a visual representation of a particular subject I am very careful to keep in mind the audience.  If I apply a subject line to an image such as “Angry Sun” then I want to supply an image, or evidence, to directly support the subject matter and persuade the audience to look at the image just as I intend.  An image of the sun through a cool-blue filter won’t support the charge of “Angry Sun” and would therefore cause the audience to doubt my argument.  This instance of framing is a simple example and is set to highlight a trait or data of the evidence and also to guide the reader’s response (Ramage 98-100).
            Chapter four yields many valuable lessons that propel rhetorical thinking forward for me. Understanding visual rhetoric and visual evidence and how to frame it is a foundation stone in the house that is the rhetorical triangle.  Ethos, logos, and pathos are the binding agent that gives strength and leverage to an argument in the eyes of the reader.  In my mind it is essential to tie visual representations of a view and visual representations of evidence to an argument in order to maintain the binding agent’s strength throughout the argument. 
           




Work Cited

Ramage, John D., John C. Bean and June Johnson. Writing Arguments:  A Rhetoric with Readings.  8th Edition.  New York:  Longman, 2010. Print.